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i have wanted to do this for a very long time.
This is for my Sensei ~bloodstained-sheira This is the golden haired angel, Anne >3< first time i have drew wings in my life. OTL I know i drew the yellow parts on her top on the wrong side.... but its cus i drew the sketch the other way and forgot to change it... ;3; OTL but i still hope you will accept this gift *U* Anne©~bloodstained-sheira Art© *chaotic-anime-power Commentswow. it looks beautiful ^^
-- Axel:just walk this way, and- OH CRAP A TRAINER!!!! Random Trainer: D00D! Ah found @ P3nn33!!!! WATCH THIS VIDEO NOWS!!! (its not mine) [link] ;_______; really? ;3; omg thankyou so much!!!
-- Join my halloween contest [link] DEADLINE-15th november! me and *llama-doll are also holding a friendship contest![link] DEADLINE-1st december! aaw thankyou so much ^_^
-- Join my halloween contest [link] DEADLINE-15th november! me and *llama-doll are also holding a friendship contest![link] DEADLINE-1st december! of course. =3
-- Axel:just walk this way, and- OH CRAP A TRAINER!!!! Random Trainer: D00D! Ah found @ P3nn33!!!! WATCH THIS VIDEO NOWS!!! (its not mine) [link] lol they are surposed to look like angel wings though OTL more like bird wings.... ;^;
-- Join my halloween contest [link] DEADLINE-15th november! me and *llama-doll are also holding a friendship contest![link] DEADLINE-1st december! waa this looks awesome! ^___^
the wings turned out really pretty <3 ^__^ and I really really love her expression ^^ looks so alive -- Imagination is more important then knowledge... (A. Einstein) Proud member of ~SpiritReplica Cosplay Group |
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Critiques
The whole composition of the lineart is perfect and complements the character. The hair's shading and lighting is amazing and looks very soft. It is obvious white a lot of work was put into the coloring as the color choice is lovely.
Some things to improve on would be that the shading of the clothes could be more defined, as in more darker areas and highlights for a higher contrast and impact. And instead of using solely colors that are a shade darker/lighter than the base to shade/highlight, other colors could be used. Such as a deeper brown/gray shadow on the dark areas of the shirt. I would also recommend darker shadows in some areas on the skin (such as a brownish red and then a gray tone for deepening the shadow and creating more impact.
For the background I would recommend not a sky bg but maybe a striped or patterned stock image to match the cuteness of the girl. The sky blue against the reddish brown sort of makes the girl seem unnatural. The background doesn't fit very well.
Overall, the technique used for the lineart was wonderful, the coloring was very soft but the background could be changed for higher impact.
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